Personal Statements

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1. First (very rough) Draft

   By jbuff , March 26, 2013
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   • jbuff
   • March 27, 2013

2. Personal statement

   By dream2pa , March 12, 2013
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   • atheaslet
   • March 27, 2013

3. 5th EDITION PERSONAL STATEMENT...PLEASE READ AND CRTIIQUE! THANK YOU KINDLY!

   By Jchyat , February 10, 2013
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   • Jchyat
   • March 27, 2013

4. HELP! 6TH draft

   By Dawnlee , March 19, 2013
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   • atheaslet
   • March 26, 2013

5. How to avoid the cliches if that's truly what happened

   By TarheelGirlx3 , February 22, 2013
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   • atheaslet
   • March 26, 2013

6. help!! 1st draft.

   By clg0318 , February 13, 2013
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   • PAhopeful13
   • March 17, 2013

7. Please critic the first draft of my PS

   By apescience , March 14, 2013
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   • bgdog
   • March 14, 2013

8. crappy transcript from years ago, to address or not to address? that is the question

   By simco77 , March 8, 2013
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   • Cleverisallxx
   • March 14, 2013

9. First draft-comments please :)

   By lehman20 , February 27, 2013
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   • jtracy
   • March 13, 2013

10. 2012 PS.......critique's for 2013 Re-application?

    By ctstone1 , March 13, 2013   

    • california
    • new york
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    • ctstone1
    • March 13, 2013

11. Re-applicant PS. Criticism welcome!

    By SarahChil , March 12, 2013
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    • marktheshark89
    • March 12, 2013

12. open to suggestions

    By SarahChil , February 21, 2013
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    • Andreasmo
    • March 7, 2013

13. Looking for a KILLER statement... Annihilation of this draft is highly encouraged

    By sto27 , February 22, 2013
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    • Andreasmo
    • March 7, 2013

14. Very rough 1st draft

    By esklar , February 24, 2013
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    • esklar
    • February 27, 2013

15. 1st draft. Please kindly help!

    By huifen88 , February 20, 2013
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    • huifen88
    • February 20, 2013

16. Pleeeeease critique!

    By zerog , February 19, 2013
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    • GaeaAM
    • February 20, 2013

17. test

    By huifen88 , February 20, 2013
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    • huifen88
    • February 20, 2013

18. First draft personal statement. Please critique and give feedback.

    By odb17 , February 13, 2013
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    • odb17
    • February 13, 2013

19. First draft personal statement. Please critique! Be honest i can take it !

    By Jchyat , February 3, 2013
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    • Jchyat
    • February 10, 2013

20. question about and updated resume as part of the supplemental material

    By sijia , February 4, 2013
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    • sijia
    • February 4, 2013

21. Revision #12 Done: Any and all critiques are appreciated. 1 2

    By uscbigdawg , July 15, 2011
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    • uscbigdawg
    • February 3, 2013

22. Personal Statement draft #2, Any and All Feedback Welcome!

    By bmcginn , January 21, 2013   

    • personal essay
    • personal narrative
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    • bmcginn
    • January 28, 2013

23. Personal Narrative (For Specific Program - 500 words or less) PLEASE CRITIQUE

    By PhilipHennessey , January 22, 2013
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    • CCEMPA
    • January 26, 2013

24. PS for Reapplicants: How much did you change?

    By cmj0233 , November 1, 2012
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    • en1195
    • January 24, 2013

25. Personal Narrative - Introduction and 1st paragraph - Please Critique!

    By PhilipHennessey , January 20, 2013
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    • Just Steve
    • January 20, 2013