Personal Statements

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1. First time application, close to final draft!

   By angie_marie14 , July 30, 2015
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   • July 30, 2015

2. Third Draft! I like where this is going; still need feedback! Thanks!

   By juiceny , July 28, 2015
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   • July 30, 2015

3. 2nd Draft. Need help cutting down and with flow

   By Caroline1 , July 26, 2015   

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   • Cup
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4. second draft. critique away!

   By tommyding , July 21, 2015
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   • Glorious_Ignoramus
   • July 29, 2015

5. First draft, am I on the right track??

   By bernal227 , July 28, 2015   

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   • Glorious_Ignoramus
   • July 29, 2015

6. First Draft -- any suggestions welcome

   By rdm , July 29, 2015
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   • Glorious_Ignoramus
   • July 29, 2015

7. First Draft

   By JoyM , July 28, 2015
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   • Katier123
   • July 29, 2015

8. Final draft, looking for advice

   By findingesper , July 28, 2015   

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   • Glorious_Ignoramus
   • July 28, 2015

9. My final draft, about to submit! Any last minute edits??

   By xomelanie , July 25, 2015
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   • July 28, 2015

10. Any suggestions are appreciated! Especially about how I should end it!

    By ashleybeck3 , July 16, 2015   

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    • Caroline1
    • July 28, 2015

11. Very unique personal statement final few edits please comment

    By mloz42 , July 27, 2015   

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    • July 27, 2015

12. Draft please read & edit, much appreciated thank you!

    By johnscla , July 27, 2015
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    • gere7404
    • July 27, 2015

13. Third draft, please feel free to comment and critique

    By joy1014 , July 25, 2015
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    • July 26, 2015

14. Final Draft!!! looking for some general comments

    By EMTgonePA , July 26, 2015
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    • July 26, 2015

15. Statement feedback would be greatly appreciated!

    By em2513 , July 25, 2015
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    • PS_editor
    • July 26, 2015

16. PA First draft any comments are welcome please :)

    By mloz42 , July 24, 2015   

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    • PS_editor
    • July 24, 2015

17. All Feedback Welcome!

    By SouthDakotaKid , July 23, 2015
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    • July 24, 2015

18. Feedback please :)

    By angie_marie14 , July 22, 2015
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    • tommyding
    • July 23, 2015

19. Any thoughts on how this could flow better?

    By jkhayes1 , July 20, 2015
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    • jannajohnson891
    • July 22, 2015

20. First Draft --- Criticism needed please. Thanks in advance.

    By MotivatedOne , July 22, 2015
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    • July 22, 2015

21. Second draft, would appreciate any help! Will return favor!

    By xomelanie , July 20, 2015
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    • Guest
    • July 22, 2015

22. Personal Statement - Please Critique! all input welcomed :)

    By afloo , July 18, 2015
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    • July 21, 2015

23. Personal Statement HELP!!!

    By cbg616 , July 19, 2015
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    • xomelanie
    • July 20, 2015

24. First draft- looking for feedback and criticism!

    By lindsaybeth7 , July 18, 2015
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    • July 18, 2015

25. With a flash of light the city below me was illuminated.

    By normalnancy , July 15, 2015
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    • DiggySRNA
    • July 18, 2015