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Cut character count by decreasing wordiness.  You give a lot of exposition into your personal life about body image, for example.  I would completely remove that and simply say that your health declined and it affected your academics.  Both the first and second paragraphs read as separate introductions - you could do without one of them completely.


Yes, you seem to have a clear view on what a PA is and why it is you are seeking a seat.


Your conclusion is strong, I would keep it as is.

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