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UGoLong Posted July 27, 2015 Share Posted July 27, 2015 Overall, I really like it. The word "imposed" is not a great choice. "While the physician ordered a cardioversion, it was the PA who..." I don't know what OneWorld is, so a few words of description might be in order. Best wishes to you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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