Personal Statements

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1. First draft of personal statement: please look over!

   By kprendergast , February 9, 2016   

   • personal statement 2016
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   • rudy
   • February 14, 2016

2. FINAL DRAFT! Strong enough? Thoughts plz!

   By lastone , August 11, 2015
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   • rudy
   • February 14, 2016

3. Very First Rough Draft: Critiques Please.

   By hmphelps , February 5, 2016
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   • hmphelps
   • February 5, 2016

4. Please Help!

   By la2501 , February 5, 2016   

   • personal statement
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   • la2501
   • February 5, 2016

5. writer's block before even writing

   By arezuie , January 4, 2016
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   • TheGunsnMoses
   • February 5, 2016

6. Any feedback is much appreciated!!

   By Jlbrock2 , February 4, 2016
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   • Jlbrock2
   • February 4, 2016

7. Finished Purpose Statement, Any Suggestions

   By Helperjon , January 26, 2016
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   • Helperjon
   • January 26, 2016

8. Personal Statement Advice

   By Teacher2PAC , January 25, 2016
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   • Teacher2PAC
   • January 25, 2016

9. 1st draft.

   By jtabbay , January 8, 2016
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   • crtaylor16
   • January 17, 2016

10. 1st paragraph, already doubting my general theme.

    By lilackitten , January 12, 2016
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    • all.things.pac@gmail.com
    • January 14, 2016

11. Any advice

    By clhook , December 15, 2015
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    • clhook
    • December 15, 2015

12. Personal Statement - several drafts in

    By MMuela , November 4, 2015
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    • kargiver
    • December 11, 2015

13. Personal Statement- Advice on how/where to start

    By KR315 , December 3, 2015   

    • Personal Statement Help
    • Starting Personal Statement
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    • kargiver
    • December 11, 2015

14. Tips for writing a strong personal statement

    By paproof , December 5, 2015
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    • paproof
    • December 5, 2015

15. Rough Draft! My underdog story

    By FuturePA-C_Richardd , December 2, 2015
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    • paproof
    • December 5, 2015

16. "I had never seen a dead body before, but there my father lay..." PA Personal Statement Rough Draft. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated

    By Shannaya , November 28, 2015
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    • MeredithD
    • December 3, 2015

17. Please Review, anything helps!

    By kellyjo33 , November 16, 2015   

    • personal statement
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    • paproof
    • December 2, 2015

18. Honest Criticism Please! Greatly appreciated

    By thuyanh2133 , November 30, 2015
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    • thuyanh2133
    • November 30, 2015

19. Help!

    By dreplogle , August 31, 2015
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    • kargiver
    • November 26, 2015

20. 1st draft feedback please?

    By FromScribetoPA , September 28, 2015   

    • personal statement
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    • inthasaurus
    • November 11, 2015

21. Personal Statement Feedback Please

    By RadX2PA , October 19, 2015
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    • MMuela
    • November 4, 2015

22. Rough Draft! Please take a look and critique!

    By Boots , October 30, 2015
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    • MMuela
    • November 4, 2015

23. Supplemental Essay for MEDEX Northwest

    By PhillipEBrown9 , September 29, 2015   

    • MEDEX Northwest
    • University of Washington
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      • MEDEX Northwest
      • University of Washington
      • PA school
      • Supplemental App
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    • paproof
    • November 3, 2015

24. PA school Personal Statement. Feedback please!

    By Guest chornbro, September 12, 2015   

    • Personal Statement
    • essay
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      • essay
      • student
      • Pre-PA
      • application
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    • Davidteinke
    • October 19, 2015

25. Military wife and EMT asking for help on my personal statement

    By swck , September 30, 2015   

    • first draft
    • personal statement
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    • Davidteinke
    • October 19, 2015