liliixoxo Posted April 23, 2019 Share Posted April 23, 2019 Hi everyone! I was wondering if anyone would be able to give me some feedback on my personal statement. This is the google doc link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WzHXUUlMxPUMcp_eOcx4ZKpaPwo5IRe1dOQSg6Xfixg/edit Thank you very much! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aba51 Posted April 25, 2019 Share Posted April 25, 2019 It looks like someone edited/commented on your essay. Do you know what the highlighted sections mean? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patricia5827 Posted April 25, 2019 Share Posted April 25, 2019 Ill be honest the whole first half of the essay is pretty boring. Standard quotes, standard lines saying "I was first introduced to this profession by seeing XYZ.." . Think of ways to create an interesting opening Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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