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PACdan Posted September 9, 2014 Share Posted September 9, 2014 I like the second more. It's direct, lists your experiences and accomplishments, has you overcoming some obstacles, and spells out why you want to be a PA more succinctly. I would consider dropping the part about almost applying to med school. It doesn't add much and may serve as an unnecessary distraction. I assume you're only applying to one program? As your last paragraph spells out the school specifically. That will alert the school that you're only applying to them. I don't see that working against you and maybe even a bit for you...but only 1!? Good luck didymus. We need more well dressed shiba inu in medicine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
didymus Posted September 9, 2014 Author Share Posted September 9, 2014 I like the second more. It's direct, lists your experiences and accomplishments, has you overcoming some obstacles, and spells out why you want to be a PA more succinctly. I would consider dropping the part about almost applying to med school. It doesn't add much and may serve as an unnecessary distraction. I assume you're only applying to one program? As your last paragraph spells out the school specifically. That will alert the school that you're only applying to them. I don't see that working against you and maybe even a bit for you...but only 1!? Good luck didymus. We need more well dressed shiba inu in medicine. Thanks very much for the feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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