Personal statement help (first time applicant)

[PAApplicant22]

Hi I’m a first time applicant and would anyone be interested in looking at my personal statement and seeing what needs to be revised? Here is the link down below 

Personal Statement copy.docx

Edited May 18, 2021 by PAApplicant22
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[missjessthepa]

On 5/18/2021 at 4:37 PM, PAApplicant22 said:

Hi I’m a first time applicant and would anyone be interested in looking at my personal statement and seeing what needs to be revised? Here is the link down below 

Personal Statement copy.docx 16.95 kB · 20 downloads

Hi, I can take a look at it if you like? I was admitted to start this fall on my first cycle just fyi. Send me a message if you still want me to take a look. The link is not working.