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ntoups4 Posted April 18, 2016 Share Posted April 18, 2016 I think your essay is really strong, but you could make your introduction better. Try and think of something that would really catch their attention quickly rather than slowly introducing your experiences. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
md_pa1993 Posted April 18, 2016 Author Share Posted April 18, 2016 I think your essay is really strong, but you could make your introduction better. Try and think of something that would really catch their attention quickly rather than slowly introducing your experiences. I appreciate your input! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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