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Hopefully my final draft! Opinions and suggestions appreciated!

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Looks pretty good and is an enjoyable read that answers the question of why you want to be a PA with descriptive language. The last paragraph needs a little work though... I would not say that pts are "unconcerned" as that may come across a little insensitive/harsh. The ending could still be a little stronger (tie it back to your opener in someway). And definitely get someone with excellent grammar skills to proofread for any mistakes (I am not that person, haha).

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