douglas Posted June 15, 2015 Share Posted June 15, 2015 Submitted! Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lanime Posted June 15, 2015 Share Posted June 15, 2015 Looks pretty good and is an enjoyable read that answers the question of why you want to be a PA with descriptive language. The last paragraph needs a little work though... I would not say that pts are "unconcerned" as that may come across a little insensitive/harsh. The ending could still be a little stronger (tie it back to your opener in someway). And definitely get someone with excellent grammar skills to proofread for any mistakes (I am not that person, haha). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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