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jmagishtein Posted July 15, 2014 Share Posted July 15, 2014 Wow, your essay is really amazing. the only thing you might want to change is to place the first two sentences of the third paragraph after the third sentence. I was slightly confused where those two first sentences were heading and where they came in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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