First Time Applying! Please feel free to blast/praise/hate on my PS. Thank you!

[pct2010]

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[pct2010]

Any takers?

[srobinson20]

Sam,

 

I love your opening statement.... Overall, it could use some re editing and I would emphasize as well as elaborate a bit more on your own personal working experience. Your headed down the right path!

[brandell]

I think you should get rid of the bullet points, they're very distracting. Instead, work your experience into a meaningful paragraph. Overall I agree you're headed int he right direction.

[rbusta]

I think you should get rid of the bullet points, they're very distracting. Instead, work your experience into a meaningful paragraph. Overall I agree you're headed int he right direction.

 

I agree very much about the bullet points. Also, i strongly suggest you talk more about what it is that attracts you to the PA profession, what about it draws you to achieve the profession? Why PA and not nurse or MD. Being specific about this highlights your understanding about the profession and would show the admissions committee you are clear about what you want to get yourself into. You touched on this a little at the beginning of your last paragraph. Elaborate on your familiarity with the sight of "PA-C" through your experiences as a CNA. You're on the right track. good luck!

[pct2010]

Thank you everyone! I submitted my application today, tossed the bullet points, and elaborated on my reasons for picking the PA profession specifically. Thank you for your insights!