nldeitz105 Posted June 5, 2019 Share Posted June 5, 2019 (edited) Hello, Attached I have my first draft and the second time I am applying. I want my essay to be really strong to make up for my ok GRE score and acceptable, yet fewer, PCE hours than other applicants. I hope to turn my essay in very soon and I hope it feels interesting and genuine and makes me stand out as an applicant. I would appreciate any critique or advice on my personal statement essay. If you can read my essay I would like feedback on how the essay flows, any negative language or generic language I need to leave out or rephrase, areas I need to provide more detail or explain myself better, and if my essay is interesting enough and would look good to PA programs. Also, I am wondering if I am using the correct tense and how CASPA wants your essay to appear on their application (font, spacing, tabs, etc). Thanks for your time and help! PA personal essay rough draft word doc June 2019 3.docx Edited June 5, 2019 by nldeitz105 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
paPassion7 Posted June 6, 2019 Share Posted June 6, 2019 I didn't go through and read it, but your essay is way to long. 2000 characters to long. You will need to cut down a large portion of it before anyone can give you advice on content. Good luck! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reeannuh Posted June 13, 2019 Share Posted June 13, 2019 (edited) Here ya go! Just a few pointers to help you out!!! @nldeitz105 1479467027_PApersonalessayroughdraftworddocJune20193.docx Edited June 13, 2019 by Reeannuh Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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