grace55 Posted April 7, 2019 Share Posted April 7, 2019 (edited) Hello! I will be applying for the 2019-2020 cycle and have been working on my personal statement. I was wondering if anyone would be willing to look over it and provide me your honest opinion/feedback? And I would be more than happy to do the same for you! PA Personal Statement.docx Edited April 7, 2019 by grace55 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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aba51 Posted April 9, 2019 Share Posted April 9, 2019 It sounds like you have a lot of PA interactions which is good! With that said, a large part of your narrative were descriptions of your encounters with them. Those PA shadowing experiences can be summarized in your resume/CV. Your personal statement can be an extension of your resume but in more telling details. For example, in your resume you can briefly describe your overall experience/what you learned during the shadowing experience, but in your essay you can focus on a single patient or a single moment of the PA that made you excited about the PA profession. You obviously know what PAs do and so do the adcoms. Use your essay to highlight and specify why the PA profession is for you (but don't relay the duties of a PA but more so, the qualities). Why are you a good fit for the program that you're applying to? Why should they choose you? How has your patient care experience shaped you or prepared you to become a PA? If you have any questions or need more guidance/clarification, feel free to message me! Best of luck! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ashleymarie92 Posted April 17, 2019 Share Posted April 17, 2019 II think that you talk too much about other people in your essay. I would shorten your shadowing experiences and elaborate more on your own experiences as a CNA and what qualities makes YOU likely to be able to fill that role. Show, don't tell. Do this by giving specific examples of times when your leadership/teamwork skills accomplished something difficult, for example. Best of luck! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
michealhunt Posted April 17, 2019 Share Posted April 17, 2019 (edited) I can help you with a personal statement, I have been working in this field for a long time and can help you with a personal statement. I have been working as a teacher at the university for a long time and help students with all questions. A personal statement is quite a hard job and you need to learn how to write it. I conduct my own writing of various types of work, you can visit my personal statement writing service https://papersowl.com/write-my-personal-statement , it is an excellent service where you can learn how to write personal statements, I think you should be interested and informative, if you have any write questions to me personally and I will be happy to answer, I was happy to help. Edited April 19, 2019 by michealhunt Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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