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Hello! I am a senior in Life Science and will be graduating spring 2019.

I have a 3.411 cGPA, 3.263 sGPA.  I have been a CNA in the hospital setting for 2 years and currently work as a CNA in home health and a tutor. I have 400 volunteer hours, 50 shadowing hours, myriad leadership positions on campus and though I know research has little to do with the PA field, am conducting biomedical research to learn more about the physiology behind the heart.  I apply this cycle and was curious to see other's opinions on my statistics. Thank you. 

 

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Stats are good enough for an interview. How many hours do you have as a CNA? I would suggest getting a job within the hospital as opposed to being a home health aid as you are exposed to more and schools like that


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