VFord Posted September 1, 2017 Share Posted September 1, 2017 Document attached EDITED OU PA Personal Statement.docx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Corpsman2PA Posted September 14, 2017 Share Posted September 14, 2017 No no no no no no. Is OU a "Physican Associate" program? If not, stop saying that. Also, you could abbreviate to PA after specifying once...The only thing that grabbed me in your statement was you becoming a mother your freshman year. Honestly, I would start with that and go from there. This is supposed to be a personal statement, and all you've done is tell us about some of the times you worked with PAs, cliches about specialty flexibility, etc. I don't KNOW you after reading this. It didn't spark a desire in me to want to meet you for an interview either. Try this exercise... take the paragraph of you becoming a mother and seeing your child for the first time as your opener. Then see where the words take you. Show us a deeper side of you, and then show us how that side found the desire of the PA profession. Sent from my iPhone using Tapatalk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UGoLong Posted September 16, 2017 Share Posted September 16, 2017 I've got to agree. Tell us about you. Make us want to meet you. Tells us about what shaped you. Let us see your personality. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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