LastNameEver Posted August 30, 2015 Share Posted August 30, 2015 Hey guys new member to the forum but have always popped in as a guest to look up advice. Would like some advice on my PS. Any critique/advice is welcome, looking to submit sometime next week, oct/dec deadlines. I am worried i don't talk enough about my experiences and am coming off a little too cheesy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
paproof Posted August 31, 2015 Share Posted August 31, 2015 There are WAY too many "why"s in your intro paragraph... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LastNameEver Posted August 31, 2015 Author Share Posted August 31, 2015 Thanks for the input, I guess I was overzealous in trying to hammer my point in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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