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paproof Posted May 18, 2015 Share Posted May 18, 2015 You don't mention why you want to become a PA at all which should be one of the main points of the essay... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
prepa106 Posted May 18, 2015 Author Share Posted May 18, 2015 Hi paproof, thank you for reading. I tried to convey my reasons: 1. I like to use my intellectual curiosity to help people (no research) 2. I'd like to have more time to help the underprivileged sooner (no doctor) 3. PA has a unique aspect of lateral movement between specialities since I love every different areas of medicine I became involved in 4. The PA I shadowed was a great healthcare provider to his patients, reaffirming my aspiration I tried my best to show my passion. If these reasons were not obvious, should I just be blatant about it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
paproof Posted May 19, 2015 Share Posted May 19, 2015 Your essay is very well-written. But saying you want to help the underprivileged sooner does not count out becoming a physician. It would help you if you wrote more about your experiences with PAs from shadowing or employment. Yes, I'd be more blatant. Don't make them read between the lines. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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