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ralinina Posted August 3, 2013 Author Share Posted August 3, 2013 PS: It will not let me edit the formatting at all on this thing, not even tabs/returns! Hopefully it is still readable for you guys :) Thanks in advance for your help! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miss Posted August 4, 2013 Share Posted August 4, 2013 You have a great story but many questions are unanswered that are going to be important to include. Why not rn or md, why pa. Just wanting to help people and having short interaction W a pa is not sufficient. They want to see that you have chosen pa for a reason. Include why, what about pa professions makes you interested, how it fits into your life. Your 1st and last paragraph has to be connected flawlessly as if you were telling a story. It needs to flow ,Remember that they are going to be reading many statements, how are you going to stand out. I hope this helps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ralinina Posted August 4, 2013 Author Share Posted August 4, 2013 Thank you for your response! You raise some very good points that I will try to address in my revision. Working on the next draft now :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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