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kenzielmonty

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  1. This is my second draft and I would really appreciate any feedback possible! Thanks! The CBC showed an abnormally high white blood count and a conversely low count in both red blood cells and platelets. As she approached the reception desk, her hands were shaking and her eyes were dilated. At 23 years old, the woman was remarkably weathered and fatigued. After providing me with her name and appointment time, she stared at me with curiosity as she inquired about my age and purpose of being there. Providing a quick synopsis of my interest in medicine and desi
  2. The CBC showed an abnormally high white blood count and a conversely low count in both red blood cells and platelets. As she approached the reception desk, her hands were shaking and her eyes were dilated. At 23 years old, the woman was remarkably weathered and fatigued. After providing me with her name and appointment time, she stared at me with curiosity as she inquired about my age and purpose of being there. Providing a quick synopsis of my interest in medicine and desire for opportunities to gain experience in the field, she shook her head in what seemed to be understanding and acknowledg
  3. Hey guys! please give this a quick read and let me know what you think! It is my first draft, and I'm not sure how relatable/compelling it is Medicine has played a significant and powerful role in my life from the very beginning. In August of 1993, a routine delivery saw the arrival of two seemingly healthy babies, both with stellar health reports. Nonetheless, at five weeks, I was frantically rushed to the emergency room for a fever; an immediate red flag within pediatrics- a notion with which my mother, a registered nurse, was well versed. Following several b
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