FromScribetoPA Posted September 28, 2015 Share Posted September 28, 2015 REMOVED Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skyfall Posted September 29, 2015 Share Posted September 29, 2015 I think it's on the right track! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swck Posted October 2, 2015 Share Posted October 2, 2015 Really great start! You've done a lot! haha To help shorten it...the third to last paragraph starting with "One very important..." seems repetitive. I think only the last sentence is needed here as it shows what you want to accomplish making it unnecessary to tell them it as well. If that makes sense? I'm guilty of it too but you also use a bit too many adjectives that aren't necessary such as "tremendous responsibility" "very complex". I've just heard that too much is frowned upon! Hope this helps! If you have time I have also posted my personal statement and would love your feedback! Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EMiller Posted October 12, 2015 Share Posted October 12, 2015 I agree with Swck above me. Try to be a little more concise and that will keep you in the character count. However, I believe you're on the right track as well. Reading about being a medical scribe made me question whether or not being an EMT and working toward my Paramedic was really the best route to PA school. That kind of exposure to those situations could have been really cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davidteinke Posted October 19, 2015 Share Posted October 19, 2015 Guys, you are in right trac, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
inthasaurus Posted November 11, 2015 Share Posted November 11, 2015 I really liked your first paragraph up until you wrote "Physician's Assistant." I stopped reading the rest. Unfortunately, some admission committees might do the same... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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